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The Canadian Girl
3-1: Loss of Control
19th Mar 2021, 8:48 PM
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Boss Rush
One Odd Encounter
A Fight with the Creatures of the Night
Small Talk Explanations
Let's Help Peri!
Flesh Wounds
Demonic Awakening
Twisted Truth
Together We Stand
The Neo World Committee
A Bus Drive to Pampanga
The Canadian Girl 1-1
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The Canadian Girl 1-4
The Canadian Girl 1-5
The Canadian Girl 1-6
The Canadian Girl 1-7
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The Canadian Girl 2-1
The Canadian Girl 2-2
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The Canadian Girl 2-7
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3-1: Loss of Control
3-2: Crash
3-3: Hard Step
3-4: Thicker Smoke
3-5: Hit in the Gut
3-6: Vision
3-7: Clever Recovery
3-8: Reattachment
3-9: Retaliation
3-10: Gone
3-11: Hiding in the Tree
3-12: The Hit
3-13: The Catch
4-1: Surprise Attack!
4-2: Fallen to the Floor
4-3: The Unexpected
4-4: Hidden Gift
4-5: Tracker
4-6: Final Strike
4-7: Pulling Difficulties
4-8: Refusal
4-9: Walk Away
4-10: Sierra's Profile
Short Rest
Training Session
Crystal Clear
Meanwhile
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Squirreltastic-Blue
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20th Mar 2021, 10:28 AM
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That's gotta sting! I have so much second hand pain for her, and that's not an intended pun!
When characters experience pain, I often add just a tiny spiky tear. Adds a lot of mileage!
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Reapeageddon
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20th Mar 2021, 3:00 PM
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A tiny spiky tear, huh? I think I'll try that out once I start working on the next pages!
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Squirreltastic-Blue
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22nd Mar 2021, 4:25 PM
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Though it's from surprise and fear here, this is the kind of tear I mean.
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